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im no word oriented person, but wow, ur writing is so emotional that it makes me feel emotions, and i don't really like to feel emotions, but reading even lil snippets of ur writings makes me feel emotions in a good/sad/grr way that i can't really express smartly. being open is scary but ur a brave molerat for sharing this

all in all, i think ur really good at what you do. and i support and root for u in whatever endeavors you traverse in the future :DDD 

RAAAAAAAAAAHHH THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME MAKE YOU FEEL EMOTIONS 🥺🥺🥺 I SHALL MAKE YOU FEEL EMOTIONS UNTIL YOU DROWN IN THEM. THANK YOU FOR THE PRIVILEGE <33

(Also. Molerat@*(#%&*(@%)@ How dare,)

Thank you so much for your support 🥺 it means the world to me mwaaahhh

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oh aspen 🥺 so thrilled to see you entering the jam! the vulnerability in this feels like a hug farewell, cradling the parts of you laid bare in your ever provocative words. giving you the biggest hug for sharing this with us! 

DHHDSGh??? Aaaaah thank you so much for your words 🥹🥹🥹 They make me so happy. I have to admit, publishing something like this was a little very scary, but I'm so glad to hear that it struck such a chord with you. Thank you, and I'm 100% hugging you back!! 🫂🫂🫂

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The writing is so beautiful! I can't find the proper words to describe it. It's perfectly ephemeral and soft -- like snow falling on your tongue, or sand running through your fingers. 

As shown by the narrator, the way they write is dreamy and magical, the way a child views the world. Grasping for romantic descriptions and metaphors demonstrates just how much they cling to their youth, as much as they shame themself for being immature and childish.

The loveliness of the words against the despair of the narrator creates a wonderful contrast that truly conveys the longing, sincerity, and pitifulness of the author of the letter.

Overall, wonderful piece! 

🥹🥹🥹 Misty, I don't know what to say... thank you so much for such lovely words. It's made me so happy!!! It's so wonderful to hear that my writing touched you in such a way — I keep repeating myself, but thank you. Your analysis made me giggle and kick my feet fr fr